JT - Rough Cut 4 Feedback

Audience: We showed this version of the rough cut to members of our A2 media class (all aged 17/18years old). This is an ideal audience to show the rough cut to because it fits within our primary target audience for the music video of 15-24year olds. 

In yesterdays lesson we got feedback on our rough cut 4:

• Jack on the rocks (zoom, out of time)
• Two pizza scenes
• End gets faster then slower
• Fade music
• More footage at the end/slow down the existing footage
• Jack :multiple images
• Smaller layers of narrative
• Performance on too long (leave first one)
• Refilm performance
• Shot distance
• Fade into one another (narrative)
• Artificial zoom
• Zoom into a heart, transition to the next shot
• mobile phone shot, bit awkward and out of place Flying: shot should be held longer to time in with music
• Good layering
• Intro of Jack gazing
• Reflection in the tarn and throwing bread to the ducks
• First perfromance: hard to see?
• no order to the narrative, simple linear edit wont work