Friday, 30 September 2011

GM - Marking an A2 Product

The highlighted sections indicate why I gave it the mark I did.


Track: We Are The Ocean - Confessions
Video produced by: Chris Lawrence

The marks scheme:
Production (40 marks)


The candidate is expected to demonstrate excellence in the creative use of most of the following technical skills:

  • holding a shot steady, where appropriate
  • framing a shot, including and excluding elements as appropriate
  • using a variety of shot distances as appropriate
  • shooting material appropriate to the task set
  • selecting mise-en-scene including colour, figure, lighting, objects and setting
  • editing so that meaning is apparent to the viewer
  • using variety of shot transitions, captions and other effects selectively and appropriately - Chris used layering in appropriate sections which suited the track choice
  • using sound with images and editing appropriately for the task
Where a candidate has worked in a group, an excellent contribution to construction is evident

Overall I would give this music video: Excellent (40/40)
This is because it looks very professional due to the large variety of shot types and shot transitions. I think that he has captured the meaning of the lyrics perfectly. The meaning to the reader is apparent however I did not understand why the shots of Betty's tearooms were included, it didn't seem to fit in with the rest of the video.


2 comments:

  1. Try to pick out specific examples for each which you think illustrate the level its at. This was a good vid, but wasn't quite 40/40 btw! It is excellent on several aspects, proficient on some.

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