JT - Rough Cut 5 feedback

Audience: We showed this version of the rough cut to members of our A2 media class (all aged 17/18years old). This is an ideal audience to show the rough cut to because it fits within our primary target audience for the music video of 15-24year olds. 

• Extreme long take of Jack at the begining, zoom in, cut to a shot of him walking, it doesnt have to be lip syncing
• She's the one: focus on girls, split screen?
• First two performance shots, on screen far too long and too much
• second performance: fade to black, cross disolve?
• Fade to black into instrumental section
• Layer performance
• Jack agaisnt the lampost, do it to the beat, use empty half, c/u of singers face or boy and girl either side
• Kids on too long eating cake mixture
• greater variation of robbie
• flying: slow down, ghosting effect (trailing), animated zoom
• Blowing out candles, what comes next, zooming into candle
• more multiple layer
• More shot variation
• Split screen - (1,2,3,4), pop up one by one
• link all candles
• Jack sat on rocks: more shots of it, to break up performance, jumping off the rock-flying
• look through all Jacks footage, see if we can get any to break up the video
• Jack on rocks, on too long
• pace and variation