Audience: We showed this version of the rough cut to members of our A2 media class (all aged 17/18years old). This is an ideal audience to show the rough cut to because it fits within our primary target audience for the music video of 15-24year olds.
Extreme long take of Jack at the begining, zoom in, cut to a shot of him walking, it doesnt have to be lip syncing
She's the one: focus on girls, split screen?
First two performance shots, on screen far too long and too much
second performance: fade to black, cross disolve?
Fade to black into instrumental section
Jack agaisnt the lampost, do it to the beat, use empty half, c/u of singers face or boy and girl either side